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how I fell in love with the sky

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You cloaked your face in a mask of blue, and hoped that no one would see the scars you kept hidden.

I stayed awake while the rest of the world slept. You let me see behind your disguise, but instead of flaws, I found only constellations.

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  1. SQUEEB.

    HANNAH DENO.

    HOW.

    DID.

    YOU.

    WRITE.

    SOMETHING.

    SO.

    WONDERFUL.

    AGHAGAHAG. I LOVE IT. KEEP WRITING. FOREVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER AND EVER. I'll read your words. Forever.

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    1. Haha thank you so, so much, Candence! :) You write beautiful words as well.

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  2. Did you write this? It's so beautiful!

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    1. Thank you! Yup, I wrote it. The idea had been floating around in my head for awhile, then today it just sort of happened.

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  3. I love this! "instead of flaws, I found only constellations." I love this SO, SO much!! Beautiful writing, wow.

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    1. Awww thanks, Olivia! You're comments always make me happy :)

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  4. This is SO SO beautiful <3 I love it!

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  5. Woah. o.O Hannah. How on earth did you make me feel something in just three sentences? Bravo!

    Chloe | Curious Ramblings

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  6. Wow. O-O In love, I guess you can look past anything. <3

    xoxo Morning

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  7. You did what best-selling authors do in one book in a few sentences. This is probably my quote of the year. <3

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    1. This made me so happy, Jo, thank you! X)

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  8. ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF GENIUS. Keep it up girl.

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  9. That was beautiful. You can put so much feeling and meaning into just a couple dozen words! My English teacher would absolutely love this. (-:

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  10. This... this is so gorgeous. <3 I'm in love with your writing style.

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    1. Thank you, Beezee! That means a lot :)

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  11. This is so beautiful and heart touching. I love it, Hannah. Writing like this makes me love writing and reading and words all over again. Thanks for writing this and posting it. <3

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  12. Wow! Not only does the picture make me speechless but also your words.
    Next time I look at the night sky, I'll think about what you wrote.

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  13. Whoa. Whoa, whoa, wow. O_O girl. Pure, real, p o e t r y .

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    1. It's not quite as AMAZING as your poetry, but thank you ever so much, Kate! :)

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